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Jace Star (posting for Jace)

Post by Axel The Bunny on Wed Nov 05, 2014 12:51 am

Name: Jace Star

Age:12

Years at Acadamy:0

Family: Emily star(mother) Xern Shikami(father) Ren shikami (Alive brother)

History: Jace was born in a town called Cerry Vill, a small town known for its cherrys and snow. The village seemed to be haunted, filled to the brim with "Ghosts." Most where just superstitions, but some times it was a specter.The reall thin though was that a wisp was bonded with the boy over night while in his room at the age of 9, the wisp was about to become a specter and the over charged energy made the boys natural hair color change from brown to white.The boy was always protected when he needed it the most by snow, pushing people or burying theme dear a heap of it. This was done though the wisps ability to influence his actions. One day though, the boy went of to school, his younger brother found a bag, this in which he found a paper saying that he could go to a special school for gifted students, why was his brother able to go as a gifted student? Why was he unable to go when he was older? When Jace got home his brother was the first thing he saw, who stomped off after glaring at his brother rudely. There was a paper in his hands. He put it down crumpled and sat down on the couch pouting. Jace grabbed the paper and checked it out. He then after read ing the paper ran for the home phone to call his mom and dad. He was excepted into a private school, that was for gifted students. At the time Jace thought it was because of his Abilitys as a runner, but it ended up being about the Snow power.

Physical appearance:Jace has white hair and silver eyes with slightly pointed ears. His casual attire is a navy blue jacket and a white tee shirt. His out door ware is a longer jacket and a diffrent color tee shirt or polo. During classes Jace can be found wearing a white dress shirt under a blue uniform jacket, which has a red tie and Navy blue pants.

Personality: Jace is a independant but caring person. He dosn't really seem to enjoy peoples company, but if there is a big crowd, you can see Jace on the other side of the area, as in if there is a crowd he is as far as he can from them. Jace try's to blend in with his class mates, and seems to stay as quite as possible. He can be emotional and whiney since his age, and can become quite annoying. When some one try's to scare him, he is most likely going to freak out. Jace is quite calm and collected with most situations. Though if someone goes and messes with his models(that he makes for a game, kinda like war hammer and warmachine.) Jace likes to do things his own way unless he has a high respect for the person he his being ordered by. He also dosn't show that he cares to people, and usually acts behind the scenes to help others.

Wisp: the wisp is like the one it's bonded with except it dosnt care for anyone lther than it self and Jace. It is always trying to warn Jace of what's happening that could affect him, though it is unsuccessful most of the time. It for some reason though dosnt try to communicate like any othe wisp though, it try's to not talk, and usually just guides Jace. It's also got a mind of its own and likes to pull pranks, though Jace makes it restrain it self, for he is the only one he knows that is a user of snow. The wisp likes to influence Jaces movements and ends up makeing Jace do things he usually wouldn't do.

Wisp class: Elemental-snow

Super powers: Jace can control snow by will and can make blizzards. He can also make snow out of the water in the air.(dosnt know how yet)

Weakness: loyalty to his friends. Once Jade had made a friend he can't let then go. He gets to attached to them and starts to treat them as family. If one ends up being a bad guy though and he/she is a closer friend than the others Jace will fallow that person over to the other side.

Talents: Jace is a good swimmer, and runner, being one of the best runners in his age group. He also is very good at stratagy games. He has a hobby of makeing minature models from games.


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Re: Jace Star (posting for Jace)

Post by Catigatoroala on Thu Nov 06, 2014 2:51 am

AHHH. MOD-NESS.

Ahem.

First things first, you might want to note that Jace's parents are still listed as dead when they're not.

We're gonna have to veto the thing about his town having been full of wisps. Also, wisps are drawn to conduits around the age of 10-15 years old, and we'll take 7 at the youngest, so you'll have to change the part about Jace and his wisp being bonded when he was a baby.

The white hair and silver eyes are also being vetoed.

I don't understand what you mean when you say this: "but if there is a big crowd, you can see Jace on the other side of the area." Please clarify that. And I kinda want to see more in the personality section. Some questions you could consider to help go into more detail with Jace's personality are: What virtues/traits does he consider important in people? How does he like to tackle problems: think them through first or dive right in? How's his temper? What does it take to set him off? Does he always listen to authority or does he have a rebellious streak? Also, please go into more detail about how he's caring. Since he doesn't like being around people, does he show this often, or does he just be concerned about people from a distance, or is he only caring towards his friends?

Sorry if it seems like I'm asking too many questions there, I just wanna make sure you have an awesome app and a well-developed character. Very Happy
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Re: Jace Star (posting for Jace)

Post by Catigatoroala on Sun Nov 09, 2014 8:10 pm

Spectres are really, really bad news, and to have even one roaming through the village would be a pretty drastic situation. They're extremely violent and deranged, and would not only attack people, but even other wisps. So no spectres haunting Cerry Vill.

Please talk about Jace's relationship with his family in the history. How does he get along with his parents and his brother, and how has that shaped him?

Again, the white hair and silver eyes are not going to work. Please take that out. 

And just for your reference, wisps taking over their Espers' actions is a taboo thing among Espers. #TheMoreYouKnow xP
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